(the underlines are the rhymes.)
flew a plane to the sky
But then I saw a giant Fly
The plane broke but never fell
And then I heard a bell
I woke up from my dream
But I saw the plane broken with a big beam
Friday, August 31, 2018
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Hi Leo I think this is a really clever poem and I really like it. I think that you should change the part that says the plane broke but never fell. This reminds me of a time when I wrote a story about strange things happening but then a kid wakes up and its all a dream when it wasn't.
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